The rusty rails creaked loudly in the cool breeze
Green lush moss grew all over the rotten wood
Trees started to grow through the gaps in the rails
Birds started to nest in those trees
This railroad hasn’t been used for 27 years
Until a little girl and her family wanted to go to there grandpa and grandma's house
And the only way was to go by train and go on that railroad.
is good !!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow amy that is a good post i really liked how you described that but you kept on saying that this started to do this then that started to do this.
ReplyDeleteKyla
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That was really good. I love the adjectives!! And then at the end I like how you added that someone did go on the railway.
ReplyDeletethats really cool
ReplyDeleteWow Amy.I love this piece of work you have created.I like how it is very descriptive.I like you also used adjectives.And how somebody did go on the train.
ReplyDeleteGreat story.